Monday, November 17, 2008

Our Country's Good (Opening scene)

Task 2
Form:


Elements:
The Good
- Wisehammer's speech was harsh and full of anger, so the way it was delivered gave that sense of feeling
- emphasis -> good because it brought out words that needed to be noticed
- Mary's eyes flickering and moving up and down showed that she was thinking; confusion

Improvements
- Wisehammer's movements can match with his tempo, to show dynamics of speech
- Mary -> louder voice
- Arscott -> fiddle / twist cap to show the desperate need of food (angst)

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